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Leeron, this one really landed softly—like a hand reaching out and being met. Mattie’s world, with all its careful details and quiet shifts, felt tender and true. That sling, the scent of ginger cake, the way their name gets spoken the way it feels inside—each part carried the shape of being seen. What stayed with me most was the way care wasn’t explained—it was lived. Felt in clean clothes that don’t scratch, in veggies picked with attention, in the way Tilda stays close. That kind of care builds something steady. Not flashy. Just real. Like the beginning of trust.

Thank you for sharing this. It felt like breathing in a space where someone finally gets to exhale. And please make sure to tag me in the long one to. It is after all a creation sparked by this prompt. I was tremendous fun reading your stories. Thank you for creating, participating, sharing your micro-fictions with a proud twist.

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