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Leeron,

What a wonderful story. I was right tearing up all over again—the tears had just dried after writing my answer to Gloria, and here they came again with yours. You touched something raw and gentle at the same time. I would have longed for a nest like this, the way you shape it here—tender, warm, without pressure, full of choice and soft reassurance.

The way Dolly asks questions without assuming the answers, how she sees Mattie and meets them where they are—yes. That’s exactly the kind of adult I once wished for. The kind who doesn’t teach identity, rather makes space for it to speak. I felt that in every sentence.

Have you ever considered writing books for children? Truly. You already know how to listen through story. You know how to name fear and care and invitation in the same breath. You’d be brilliant in it. I would’ve held a book like that close to my chest.

Thank you for sharing this. It touched me.

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