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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

Leeron, you harvested clarity from doubt with a spindle and eight-hand finesse—and that’s exactly the kind of glow I hoped this prompt would catch. Light doesn't always blaze; sometimes it hums behind the curtain, sips tea with the shopkeeper, and shows up as a gently drummed counter rhythm.

I love how your story shapes itself around offer and return, transaction and transformation—right down to the banner ads and illusions that can be worn like a second skin. You’re weaving light through conversation, awkwardness, wit, and strange trust. And that spindle of yours? I’m quite sure it hums like sunrise.

You didn’t weave around the prompt—you spun something true from it. And I’m beaming over here.And I loved that you returned to an earlier story and gave us a new episode of Sam and the Shopkeeper.

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Leeron Heywood's avatar

When the idea popped into my head I think my brain was going on Sam being *metaphorically* lighter after losing an ounce of doubts, but... the scene unfolded very differently from that original seed and the core focus of the doubts being harvested didn't even make the cut! Art is a funny thing.

But I am very happy with how this turned out. And I'm now pondering what banner ads look like in a world with magic...

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

I love the story and how it unfolded. It felt very organically after the last episode.

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