A few ‘souvenirs’ stood out to me - a sweat-stained handkerchief, a sandwich bag of hair clippings, a tissue dotted with blood. I started thinking maybe I should try convincing her to switch to scrapbooking.
Thank you! 😄 I was pleased with how the narrative style came out but wasn’t sure whether it would get across the creepy feel or slip into being corny.
In my mind the narrator was kinda confessing to someone? Maybe to the police, or anonymously seeking advice. A strong voice naturally sprang from that premise.
I love the voice and style in this piece. it really adds to the creepiness, sort of a creepypasta feel. so creative.
Thank you! 😄 I was pleased with how the narrative style came out but wasn’t sure whether it would get across the creepy feel or slip into being corny.
In my mind the narrator was kinda confessing to someone? Maybe to the police, or anonymously seeking advice. A strong voice naturally sprang from that premise.